tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6620101975625657382.post904148269234036737..comments2023-09-02T10:28:28.337-06:00Comments on flat yeast bread: Critique thisflat yeast breadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07310572195216580933noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6620101975625657382.post-31076717169798733982011-03-07T22:53:16.263-06:002011-03-07T22:53:16.263-06:00I almost posted one just like this for the critiqu...I almost posted one just like this for the critique this blog hop! I love having the ring in focus and the couple in the background. You did a great job with making the focus on the ring, but showing the couple in the background. I would agree with the above posters and crop the top a little bit! I have a hard time with black and whites and try to play around with some actions I download from the coffee shop blog. I would be interested in finding out what type of look were you going for in the coloring of this image? Great image and I'm sure the couple loves it!ksbusbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07868380659479908721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6620101975625657382.post-82528957580781476422011-03-07T18:29:14.753-06:002011-03-07T18:29:14.753-06:00It's a great shot and I love the expressions o...It's a great shot and I love the expressions on their faces.<br /><br />I would crop the top off a bit, down to near her head, and the left side, to tighten it up (the focus isn't primarily on their faces). It's a little washed out and overexposed, so I might change the contrast a bit and soften the lighting.<br /><br />I really love the focus on the ring and the pose!koreen (aka: winn)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00988838659415402046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6620101975625657382.post-32475711920931161682011-03-07T14:54:42.239-06:002011-03-07T14:54:42.239-06:00I think I would agree with cropping a bit at the t...I think I would agree with cropping a bit at the top - otherwise I LOVE this shot!! Your black and white seems a little cool - blue - which I ONLY notice because I really struggle with that myself. Is that what you were going for, though?<br />Beautiful, romantic moment you captured!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17435587559894367861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6620101975625657382.post-9686482690574681062011-03-07T14:31:36.500-06:002011-03-07T14:31:36.500-06:00I really like your edit. The ring is pretty crisp ...I really like your edit. The ring is pretty crisp which seems to be your focus area. I would suggest cropping out some of the top so it is not distracting and having too much "nothing" area. Cute engagement shot!Angel Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15256531344131757926noreply@blogger.com